Craft: ‘Notecard’ Story Structure Plotting

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None of this is original to me–you can find instructions on how to do basic three act story structuring with note-cards in any number of writing and screenwriting books, or on writer Alexandra Sokoloff’s extremely helpful website–but I thought it might be useful to post a picture of the thing in operation, since that’s something I’ve never really seen anyone else do.  For a basic rundown of the note-card method, see Sokoloff’s post about it here.

So, here’s the story for Oyster War, just wrapped up this evening (although, likely to be revised as things progress) all pinned up on my bulletin board.  I’ve added outlines around each act’s group of cards, just for clarity’s sake.  But you can see that each group of cards here corresponds to an act in the story, with the second act being about twice as long (and having twice as many cards as) the first and third acts.  If you were doing this for something with a proscribed time limit, like a film, you’d have to be more particular about how many cards you’d have in each act, so that you’d wind up with a two-hour movie (or whatever) but for a graphic novel, I don’t really pay that much attention to that kind of stuff, other than to just make sure that the second act is somewhere in the neighborhood of twice as long as one and three.

The closing events of each act, as well as the mid-point of act two, are important to really nail, so I use different-colored pushpins to indicate these and make sure those points in the story structure are occupied by solid story turning points.  The finales are indicated with red pins and the mid-point of act two is with a green pin.  The last book I wrote, Midnight Sun, had two parallel stories (the reporter, and the men stranded on the ice) that eventually converged–so, for that story I used different-colored note-cards to keep things straight: red cards were scenes with the reporter, blue cards were scenes on the ice, and yellow cards were scenes where they’d converged and therefore involved both the reporter and the stranded men.  In Oyster War, though, the bulk of the story is shown from the viewpoint of the story’s single protagonist, so different-colored cards would have been a bit much.  You can maybe see a couple of cards that have been marked with highlighter; these are the few scenes that take place aboard the “bad guys'” ship.

This is about as far as I usually go with “writing” before I start doing thumbnail breakdowns, but in the case of Oyster War, I may do a written story summary before I move on to thumbnails because act two was such a pain to pull together that I’m afraid there are likely to be some plot problems that I’m unaware of now but will need to sort out before I actually put pen to paper.

Amelia Reviewed in Publishers Weekly

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Publishers Weekly has a very early review of Amelia Earhart: This Broad Ocean in today’s children’s book review section:

Rather than rushing past the highlights of Earhart’s career, this quietly moving book approaches her life through the admiring curiosity of a girl who also aspires to escape traditional boundaries. Young Grace has grown up in Trepassey, Newfoundland, the nearest point in North America from which a plane can take off to fly to Europe; it’s also a seacoast community familiar with shipwrecks and other evidence of how coldly indifferent nature can be. In June of 1928, tweener Grace, the dubious townspeople and a mob of impatient newsmen wait for Earhart to finally get her plane in the air for a transatlantic flight… [ more… ]

Sketchbook 11/02

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R. Crumb in Richmond

Pop on over to ComicsWorthReading for Part I of  my coverage of R. Crumb and Françoise Mouly’s recent appearance in Richmond, Virgina.  On the fence about whether you want to read my rambling diatribe about some lecture in Richmond?  How’s about this: the article includes a picture of my dog dressed up as R. Crumb.  Check it out:

If you’re a cartoonist and you hear that Robert Crumb will be making a rare stateside appearance a few short hours drive from your hometown, you don’t ask “How much?” you just get thee to Ticketmaster.com as quickly as possible and buy tickets. And that’s exactly what I did a few weeks back when (after a Bob Clampett-style double take) I saw this very announcement posted online. R. Crumb, godfather of underground comics (and more circuitously, pretty much everything else you’ve read since the late sixties that doesn’t involve guys in tights fighting crime) would be appearing along with Françoise Mouly at Richmond’s Carpenter Center to discuss his most recent book, a fully illustrated version of Genesis, based largely on Robert Alter’s 2004 translation. [more….]

And, closely-related, there’s this:  Hey, I’m in a comic strip!

I’m apparently making an appearance in pal Rob Ullman‘s most recent Traffic and Weather strip for Richmond Magazine.  Rob graciously offered me his couch for the evening of the Crumb talk and we wound up, on a lark, meeting up with what I thought would just be some local Richmond comics folk for late dinner and/or drinks.  You can read the rest for yourself starting here.  I’ll link to the second parts of both my Crumb article at ComicsWorthReading and the second part of Rob’s strip as they appear (with some commentary on the latter, most likely).

Stay Classy, Fox News!

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“R. Crumb MOCKS book of Genesis”?!  I’m only about half-way through this book right now, but I’ve yet to encounter any “mocking.”  Yeah, sure, there’s a lot of brutal fighting, sexual violence, etc. but such is the Old Testament.  I think the only way you could read this word-for-word illustrated version of Genesis and think there was any “mocking” going on would be if you’d not actually ever read Genesis (which–given that it’s FOX News–may actually be the case here).

It’s a good thing Crumb didn’t tackle any of the books of the New Testament, what with all the “Inasmuch as ye have done it unto one of the least of these my brethren, ye have done it unto me” (Matthew 24:40) and “a rich man shall hardly enter into the kingdom of heaven” (Matthew 19:23) stuff.  OMG SOCIALISM!!!!!