Boxing Bucket, Pg. 2 – Part III

I’ve just finished tightening up the rough pencils for page 2 of the Boxing Bucket story I’m working on with my friend Chris Reilly (he wrote the story). I really struggled with a background for the second panel of this page–everything I put in there looked wrong somehow, and you can see that it’s been drawn and erased several times over. But, I’m thinking, maybe there’s a reason for that, so for now I’m going to leave it empty and see if it works as is. I’m thinking it might, since it’s got the potential for a nice comedic panel-to-panel transition between that panel and the next one in which the Einsten/alien appears. If it doesn’t, I’ll keep working on it.

I have to say: I’ve really been enjoying working on this and I can’t wait to ink this page. In fact, I’ve found that I’ve been subtly procrastinating of late, putting off good-paying freelance work to make room for the ol’ Boxing Bucket. This is a dilema no one should face in a rational society.

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Hear Ye! Hear Ye! Bonefish Grill declared crappy!

Ok, first off, let me say that I was most certainly predisposed not to enjoy my dining experience at the Bonefish Grill. I generally avoid all these stupid “P.J. O’Quackenbush’s”-type national chain restaurants…but, frankly, the dining scene here in Winston-Salem is so lacking that I’ll try pretty much anything at this point. (And I had initially gone earlier to one of Winston’s really great restaurants, the Ishi sushi bar, and the line was out the door–usually I’d wait, but I couldn’t this particular evening.)

So what were the big problems?

(1) The waitstaff is apparently required to wear chefcoats. WTF? Maybe all the local police officers should dress like the mayor…or firemen. Whatever…

(2) The usual annoying prepared speach/schtick that these chain places make the servers do. Does the management really think people find this appealing?

(3) For a fish restaurant, they have a suprizingly paltry, and quite boring, selection of fish. Just the “usual suspects:” tuna, sword, salmon, mahi, trout, sea bass (which is usally not sea bass at all, but a variety of grouper). How about something you can’t get at a restaurant that doesn’t (supposedly) specialize in fish: mackerel, turbot, amberjack, wahoo, etc. You know that expression, “There’s a lot of fish in the sea?”

(4) Most stunningly… They apparently don’t actually have any of this fish. That’s right, Katherine ordered trout…no trout. I ordered mahi….no mahi. Katherine then ordered tuna…no tuna. I tried salmon…no salmon. They did have bread, though. Maybe they should call it the “Breadcrust Grill” in the interest of truth in advertising.

(5) After this disaster, the manager comped our $7.00 appetizer. Nice try…but, I worked in food service for almost 10 years; when you have a screw up like being out of 80% of the stuff on the meny, you comp the meal. Period.

(6) And to top it all off, the food we finally did get was mediocre at best. Maybe this is because by the time we got through this whole guessing game about what menu items they actually had, the kitchen was closing down and the chefs no doubt just wanted to go home.

I’d link to their website, but it’s entirely in Flash. This is also annoying.

Boxing Bucket, Pg. 2 – Part II

..and here are the in-progress pencils for page two of the Boxing Bucket story. The first panel is pretty well tightened up, but the rest of the page is still just roughs at this point. I’ve placed the borders of the oval panels with Photoshop because I can’t draw a decent oval freehand–I’ll print out the oval borders and then lightbox them onto the bristolboard.

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Putting the “Institution” back in the “Institution of Marriage”

This is the image that was on the exterior of a “Thank You” card I received from my newly-married friends from Charlotte, John and Daphne. They have apparently dressed their cats Epiphany and Sue (who’s actually a male cat, and a hairless one at that–just like Mr. Bigglesworth) as a bride and groom.

Riding the fine line between cute and disturbing:

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Boxing Bucket, pg 2 — Part I

I had originally just planned on posting my progress on the initial page of this story, but I think I’ll continue to post stuff on this story as I get it done. It’s an interesting experience that requires me to really think about my process–which is good for any artist–and it’s a good exercise that’ll help me get prepared for my recently-begun column for Silver Bullet Comics.

So, anyway…. In my posts about the fist page of the Boxing Bucket story, I talked a bit about “building up” the panels in a page by working in different colored pencils, but I thought it’d be interesting to post a page of thumbnails as it progresses through this process. So here’s the beginnings of page 2 of the Boxing Bucket story, starting with non-photo blue, then to mustard, then to orange, then red.

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